The Time Stop Breeding Uncle Wants To Retire - Chapter 208



208 – Completion Review

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The time-stop breeding man is said to be Absolute Satgat, the author of I Want to Retire.

The work was finally completed with episode 207.

Personally, I feel very disappointed as it is my first completed work.

I will slowly explain the reason in the review.

1. Motif of the novel

What would happen if the man who stops time and rapes, which often appears in Tteokinji, uses his powers in his right mind?

This was a novel I wrote because this idea suddenly occurred to me. So I portrayed the main character as ordinary as possible.

Not only that his name is Hans, but he also has basic skills, such as sawing with a knife. Rolling around while pulling out a knife.

Of course, a lot has changed as we reach the end, but if there’s one thing that hasn’t changed.

Hans remained a sane person until the end. I try to avoid committing crimes as much as possible.

It was described as a common petit bourgeois feeling, such as not slaughtering others arbitrarily.

It feels like a man who stops time and rapes him vs. an ordinary man who stops time.

As a result, it seems that this code was not suitable for many readers. The response wasn’t very good.

Still, I was able to come this far thanks to everyone who loved and read me until the end. thank you.

2. Controversial depiction of hypnosis

Actually, I don’t have anything to say about this.

It was clear that it was a portrayal that divided likes and dislikes, so at least it should have been thrown out as a piece of cake.

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I feel like I have given many readers a bad feeling due to my inexperience, so I feel ashamed. sorry.

3. Was the author really so burned that he became passive about the 19+ rate?

At first, I just tried to push forward with my beliefs regardless of whether the response was good or not.

But as time passed and my head cooled, I began to think that way.

Is it really right to suddenly include 19+ scenes in all age groups?

Isn’t this also drift in some way?

Thinking that way, I understood the reactions of readers.

4. There was a major deviation from the original development.

In fact, Mr. Time-Stop Crossbreeding was a work that was supposed to be completed in part 2.

Of course, the overall content was similar, but the story of the queen and the demons was going to be told more.

In keeping with the tag of a reverse helmsman, Helia is the most active in preying on Hans.

Later, when Hans was released from hypnosis, the six heroines were thinking about the pregnancy ending.

However, because of number 3, there was a need to urgently revise the development.

There was a need for a development that would somehow convince readers that the heroines were not villains.

So in Part 2, the heroines lost Hans due to their own fault.

In Part 3, the story was changed to one in which he expresses his anger with maddening regret and apologizes to Hans.

However, because of this, the originally planned development of Part 2 was greatly disrupted.

Of course, the reverse helm tag faded away, and the queen and demons became nothing more than villains.

Since I am not skilled in this area, I am left with only regret.

5. About external matters

In addition, external events also brought negative news.

During the series, my friend suddenly passed away in an accident, and my mother also got into a car accident.

But even though I was out of my mind, I had to somehow fix what I had done.

I somehow managed to fit part 3 into part 1 and part 2, and was finally able to finish it today.

6. Still, I learned a lot

I really learned a lot while serializing The Time-Stop Crossbreeding Man Wants to Retire.

This shouldn’t be done this way, this is surprisingly well received, etc.

Additionally, I could feel my writing skills improving little by little as I continued to write.

There’s still a long way to go, but it’s definitely a good thing that I’ve learned a lot.

7. What if you serialize your next work?

Unlike this work, I would like to write the main character of the next work as a real person.

Of course, it was fun to serialize the time-stopping breeding man, but

I think it would be more fun if Sangtorai was the main character haha.

Of course, I plan to take a break right now and continue publishing my existing works.

It was very, very disappointing, but because it was a completed work, it left a huge lasting impression.

A lot happened while I was writing the series.

I learned a lot.

We were able to come this far thanks to the love and interest of our readers.

Thank you so much so far. Dear readers.

The writer’s absolute hat is posted.